Work cited
List of The Major World Religions, 9 August 2007, 9 September 2009, http://www.adherents.com/Religions_By_Adherents.html
Grossman, Cathy Lynn. “Faithful build a Second Life for religion online.” USA Today 1 April 2007: 6. 9 Sep. 2009 http://www.usatoday.com/tech/gaming/2007-04-01-second-life-religion_N.htm,
not bad fernando... avoid using "the" before terms like "Second Life"...it's not necessary...look again for awkward sentence structure...use present tense...revise and email to me asap...
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