Friday, September 4, 2009

my thesis statement is: "There are several churches or places of worship within the second life; some of them are Judaism, Buddhism, Hinduism, and Christianity."
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  1. UnknownSeptember 6, 2009 at 5:12 PM

    not bad Fernando...the only change i would suggest is changing "churches or places of worship" to "types of religions and types of worship found within Second Life"...see the difference? Churches suggests a place...the types of religions you mention can occur in many places...

    good though...

    dr. c

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  2. Fernando AbreuSeptember 6, 2009 at 7:20 PM

    Thanks Dr. C.

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